Tuesday, July 8, 2014

Scene annotating

 


The color of her lips and the gum of her teeth has vanished and the bones of her face was noticeable and popes out. It was crucial to see her breath and also disturbing to hear. Van helsing's face was solid and his eye brows rose up over his nose. Lucy was paralyzed and seem weak with no energy to talk, there was a moment of silence since there was nothing much to say. Van helsing tap me with his backbone and we left the room quietly. As he closed the door he went to the next door as it was open. Then he grabbed me towards him and said "holy father" he said "this is bad we must not waist any time Lucy is dying.

1 comment:

  1. This is a little shorter than what was asked for, but it's not a bad paraphrase. Where's it from?

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